Extended weather analogies to depict emotional/physical states rarely work, I wrote on one student paper. I underlined rarely three times.
Chronological ordering (i.e. Mon., Tues., etc.) makes for a weak organizing principle, I wrote on another. Can you find something more compelling?
It feels like you're hiding something, I wrote on a third. Spit it out! Coyness is not a very flattering trait for an essayist.
Hmm...maybe I should stop reading now...who knows which of my other dirty habits I'll unveil?
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hahaha oops!
This is getting interestinger and interestinger.
Dang Lady...what is up with you? Are you okay? Should I be worried? Or excited? Or both? Or neither?
Just end of the semester nuttiness. I'm good, good, good, just gotta crank these essays out, and I'll be sitting on a cloud. Nothing like summer to make a teacher happy!
Let me repeat, there is NOTHING like summer to make a teacher happy!
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