Extended weather analogies to depict emotional/physical states rarely work, I wrote on one student paper. I underlined rarely three times.
Chronological ordering (i.e. Mon., Tues., etc.) makes for a weak organizing principle, I wrote on another. Can you find something more compelling?
It feels like you're hiding something, I wrote on a third. Spit it out! Coyness is not a very flattering trait for an essayist.
Hmm...maybe I should stop reading now...who knows which of my other dirty habits I'll unveil?
hahaha oops!
ReplyDeleteThis is getting interestinger and interestinger.
ReplyDeleteDang Lady...what is up with you? Are you okay? Should I be worried? Or excited? Or both? Or neither?
ReplyDeleteJust end of the semester nuttiness. I'm good, good, good, just gotta crank these essays out, and I'll be sitting on a cloud. Nothing like summer to make a teacher happy!
ReplyDeleteLet me repeat, there is NOTHING like summer to make a teacher happy!
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